Approximately ten years to this day, she held the tiny
sleeping bundle in her arms and smiled at the miracle of creation in her hands.
He slept blissfully in her arms, wrinkling his face and stretching, like little
babies do. She giggled at the funny
faces he made in his sleep and hugged him closer...a wave of maternal feelings
sweeping over her. As she drifted to sleep with her little one beside her, a
smile lingered on her angelic face.
Her sweet slumber was broken by harsh voices. They had come
for him, her precious little bundle of joy. He was a mistake they said. His
father was no good they said. They wanted her to abandon her little one. She
clung to her precious bundle fiercely…protesting against the injustice. But no
one would listen to her. They took him away and gave him to the old lady who
lived down the road in an orchard.
A few years later, she was walking down the road by the
orchard when she saw a familiar face. She instantly recognized him, her little
one who was so cruelly taken away from her years ago. He was playing blissfully
with some kids. He had grown big and strong and handsome. He stopped and stared at her when he felt her
watching him. He looked at her quizzically, before returning to play with the
boys in the orchard.
Years passed and one day her feet took her down the orchard
road again and she saw him again. He was playing with a little one who looked
so much like him when he was small. She felt a rising excitement within her.
She was a grandmother!! Her grandson, like his Dad was the cynosure of all
eyes. She picked him up and looked at his playful eyes. He wriggled impatiently,
like little kids do. She put him down laughing and watched as he bounded off to
play.
Next day she took her parents to see her son and her
grandson. She hoped they would feel
remorse for what they had done when they beheld their great grandson. The parents
looked at the stray dog and his puppy, gamboling around and scratched their
heads. They wondered which one of the 568 stray pups they were forced to remove
from their stubborn little daughter hands and hand over to maids, car washers,
vegetable vendors, security guards, dhobi, meter reading man, LPG supply boy
etc etc etc … was this dog and his pup. The
father was sure this was puppy number 431, but the mother felt it was puppy
number 315, judging by his age. Then they looked at each other as a startling
revelation hit them. It didn't matter which puppy this was, what mattered was
they managed to get rid of it. Then they heaved a sigh of relief and slinked
away shadily into the sunset.
15 comments:
You really had me there! :D
Puppy love, doggy love...that's something you just can't get over. :)
This post was really bow wow wow!
what a twist!!! that was a good one. liked it a lot. i had to go back to the first few lines to see if there was any hint that it was a dog.
Destiny's Child: Nice to see you girl! From one doggie lover to another -- Bow Wow!! lol
Ramya: This actually happened lol! :p Thanks for the appreciation :)
I had to read it twice ..
568 wowo thats a lot of stray pups ..
Bikram's
Welcome back Madam. Nice twist to the plot
hillarious!
You had me there for a while.. I really thought you were going to write something serious. But then, this is serious to those who have been there.
Epic climax is Epic!!!
Epic climax is epic!!!
So ur back form exile?
;)
So you are back!.
-Abraham
Awww :) This comes right at the time I have been thinking i really really really want a dog. Can I have number 432 please? :D
bow wowoooooooooooooooo
my heart goes out to the doggy lovers who had to give up on their puppy. I went through it..had to give up a pup and a kitten too...sad days.
Please do restart your-think-pad also !!
Was looking for the "Like" button, before I realized everything was not on Facebook.
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